The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
As the great author once said, common people are the only achievers for the country growth if they’re skilled, the surest indicator of a great nation not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by them only. I agree to this statement and support my place with two reasons.
As the rulers, scientists, artists or rulers once were only the citizen of that country like everyone else so because of the growth of the people of the country makes the economy and other sides of the nation strong. As they’ll be not dependent on any other, like the small country like Israel is the best example about this as the people of this nation attend military training and service at least for a year and country and most advanced technologies because of the hardworking people, supplies the large amount out ammunition all over the world not by the rulers and scientists. They are only the face of the country main hard work by people.
Like Prime Minister Modi of India is also a great example of this statement as he’s the “Chai-vala” meaning tea seller and from there to P.M. of India is the journey of a common man, Lt.Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam former President of India also a common man to a great scientist in missile and astronomy development this tells us every one of them one was just an ordinary men or women of their nation and became great and make their nation/country grow at faster pace.
But great nation is still by the leader of famous scientists or artists etc, whereas general people are behind it. The country whole growth depends on the development and economical and educational growth of the citizens as the economy and development is depends upon them not on the famous achievements of the artists, rulers or any other famous person.
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- Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another. 50
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, whereas, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80707395498 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69716851593 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511254019293 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.454935797 60.3974514979 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.875 118.986275619 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.875 23.4991977007 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24347673499 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116447540037 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125947125964 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165230079721 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109374827444 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 14.1392134831 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.