In a nation the surest indication of its represented not by the achievement of its rulers, artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people. I agree with this. In a nation sometimes rulers or scientists cannot bring success for its nation. A people who work for their own interests sometimes bring the nation a reputation. That cannot bring by a famous person.
If we look in our history we can see there have many scientists who work only for their own interest but at a time they brought a good name for the country. Such as Sir Isaac Newton one day sat under an apple tree and an apple dropped on him. By seeing this a question himself why an apple doesn't fall in the sky? And for this, he researches himself to know the reason. And one day he discovered new rules. Which is now famous and many scientists work on it. And It was curiosity only nothing else. Another scientist who always ask question people to know about everything that is happening around him. And one day for his curiosity he burns his father's corn room to see how fire burns anything. And one day this boy became famous for his work. He did everything for his curiosity. And he discovered many things which are now essentials in our everyday life. So here he wasn't famous scientists before but he is now famous. And he bought many prizes for this to his country. So we can say that general welfare can bring achievement to a nation. Not all time scientists.
In history, we can know that a traveler journey for his own interest. Not anything else or he/she may not want to famous. And they write whatever they see on their trip. Such as Galiver and Ferdinand who love travel. and for this, they travel to many countries and they write whatever they saw or learn on their trip. And their books are now famous and we read them to learn. Their country earns good amount for this. And their country also became famous for this. So general welfare brings achievement to a nation.
If we look in the past we can see that there were many people who fought for their nation not to want famous people but do this for their own interest. In Bangladesh, many general people fought for their country for making it free from Pakistan. And people from all classes came to join the war not only some best person but also all class people. And they make the country Pakistan free. another exam can say that Mahatma Gandhi who fought for racism in his country. And by seeing him many men got courageous to protest against many things like widow remarriage and many other things.
In writing, we can see that many writers write for their own interest and their work is now famous and the nation of their country achieved many prizes for this. In the Bangladesh war, many writers fought by their works. General people get courageous to read them.
In the invention, we can see that Columbus who was a sailor. when he was traveling to many countries one day he discovers America. Before him, nobody knows about America. So general people can discover many unknown countries.
In my opinion, I agree with the author that "the surest indication of a great nation represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists or scientist but by the general welfare of its people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 33.0505617978 272% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2667.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 586.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55119453925 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3397248675 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.390784982935 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 14.0 1.77640449438 788% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 44.0 20.2370786517 217% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0680915793 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6136363636 118.986275619 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3181818182 23.4991977007 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.21951772744 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 23.0 4.83258426966 476% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183607201237 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545995904453 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144358795899 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172112024028 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214614566493 0.0667264976115 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 14.1392134831 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 48.8420337079 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.1743820225 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 12.1639044944 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.38706741573 75% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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