save the earth
How we can save the earth?
- Conserve our planet is important and necessary so we are always conscious about this. We have many ways to conserve our planet such as: protect water, environment, save energy at our home, don’t destroy the forest …etc.
- Firstly, let keep the water always fresh by don’t leave litter into the water, that bad habit will be lead to pollution of water. Instead of using the plastic bags, let using paper bags it easy to disposal of waste. In your home or workplace, let save water by don’t wash hand or anything with the water running continuously. Using amount enough water for everything.
- Secondly, We can save energy at home or workplace such as: always using reasonable electrical equipment as switch off lights, computers and something else when you leave work or home. Run your air conditioner sparingly let Open the window in summer instead. Ect…..
- Next, We need conserve forest, the forest likes lung, it’s help clean the air and water. if we are destroy the forest, it will be lead to natural disasters as storm, tsunami, landslide, drought or earthquake ect…. Let plant more trees in my our planet.
- Finally, in conclusion we see that necessary to save the earth, it’s protect our too. Let save our planet always clean and fresh.
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| 2019-10-19 | phamquangdinh | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... Open the window in summer instead. Ect….. - Next, We need conserve forest, the ...
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...it's help clean the air and water. if we are destroy the forest, it will be l...
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Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'destroyed'.
Suggestion: destroyed
...help clean the air and water. if we are destroy the forest, it will be lead to natural ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0502283105 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52563388689 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1130851983 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184046490708 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890926428779 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144473243505 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169024242404 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185993983994 0.0819641961636 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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