Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many
children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as
children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
People who ARGUE that nowadays parents give less attention to their children than in the past are FREQUENTLY looking back to a BRIEF period of time in the twentieth century when MOTHERS in middle-class families REMAINED at home to
look after their children. What these people are SUGGESTING is that women nowadays should not go out to work.
THE FACT OF THE MATTER IS THAT in THE MAJORITY OF families in the past both parents worked MUCH LONGER HOURS than they do nowadays. What has changed is that now in most countries their children ATTEND school rather than also working themselves. In that sense they may HAVE LESS CONTACT WITH their parents.
Nowadays, as a result of ACQUIRING AN EDUCATION, children come into contact with teachers who NATURALLY have to explain why some of their students are failing.What teachers come up with are FREQUENT stories of parents who a r e
SIMPLY too busy for their CHILDREN. And IF CHILDREN ARE NOT SUPERVISED BY THEIR PARENTS, they will often UNDERPERFORM at school.
However, ACADEMIC FAILURE is nothing new even when one or both parents are
at home. If children ARE NEGLECTED by their parents, they will suffer.I guess children probably had more problems in the past when they and their parentshad to work non-stop just to get by. These days, the law looks after children
and they can go to school, so children have lots more chances than they ever had before.
In my opinion, children probably suffered more in the past when the whole family
was obliged to work long hours just to survive. Nowadays children are protected by the
law. Moreover access to education means that they have greater opportunities than ever
before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
... are FREQUENTLY looking back to a BRIEF period of time in the twentieth century when MOTHERS i...
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...le-class families REMAINED at home to look after their children. What these people...
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... why some of their students are failing.What teachers come up with are FREQUENT stor...
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...ith are FREQUENT stories of parents who a r e SIMPLY too busy for their CHILDRE...
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...new even when one or both parents are at home. If children ARE NEGLECTED by thei...
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...CTED by their parents, they will suffer.I guess children probably had more proble...
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...se days, the law looks after children and they can go to school, so children have...
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...ore in the past when the whole family was obliged to work long hours just to surv...
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...owadays children are protected by the law. Moreover access to education means tha...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...ys children are protected by the law. Moreover access to education means that they hav...
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... have greater opportunities than ever before.
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Message: “before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have greater opportunities than ever before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, i guess, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98947368421 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4608626283 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550877192982 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2483225198 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300347542322 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107358364344 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597119068779 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115486491709 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591774968084 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.