thediagram below shows thestages in the food production chain of the United States.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where elevant
The chain of meal production’s phases in United States can be seen from the diagram.
Initially, the materials of production are taken from local livestock farm and imported from overseas regions via shipment. After being manufactured in factory, the finished products are sent to warehouse. Following this, the product will be distributed in two-strategy marketing.
Home consumption, Firstly, can be served from this term of meal purchased in retail. Then, American family members will cook the product based on their own cookery capabilities. Finally, the dish is ready to eat by householders. Regarding the second wheel, citizens of United States can consume the product by coming restaurant as well. the product bought from the aforementioned place will be cooked by a professional chef, and the dish will be served by a sit-down meal or buffet in restaurant.
Overall, to taste the material’s meal menu from both international and local are shown by two categories. These are from home-cooked food and restaurant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, regarding, second, then, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49068322981 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20508931355 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633540372671 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8585147712 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826192119262 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369637993708 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032129403818 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619972358923 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312381218452 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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