what is the main reason of our longer lives?
Without a doubt, people today live longer than in the past. I think that the main issue about this change in our lives is technological improvements. I think this way because of two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First, technology has an enormous influence on our medical methods. In the modern world, we have professional physicians with many facilities and computer systems, which can assist them. They can use electronic components to measure anything about our health very reliably like blood pressure, brain functions, breathing procedure, muscle impulses and other indications of our physical health. Moreover, technology helps us to improve our medical solutions and remedies and makes very effective and herbal drugs. today, we can’t see any healing tragedies like the past, when there were some epidemic diseases and millions of deaths. Now we can, with our new computer-controlled systems, monitor our populations and check them frequently and finish any increasing medical problem as soon as possible.
Second, technology helps us to protect ourselves among nature. In my opinion, in the modern world, we don’t need to use our body’s stamina or our muscles for surviving. The new generation of transportation, industrial robots, predicting a natural disaster, the use of instruments in our homes and many other aspects can exemplify the technology’s effects on our lives. In other words, today, you don’t need to be so strong or perceive for living. As a personal example, my grandfather had a farm around a small village near today’s city. farming about two decades ago was tedious overwhelming work. He had to carve the area by himself and hasten the process by his neighbor’s help. Harvesting was another gigantic procedure. it doesn’t need to compare his life with mine, an engineer working in a company. Even if I wanted to continue our family business, it would not damage my fitness anymore. today’s farming is much easier. you can manipulate your farm all the time with new machines like combines, jacks, excavators, lifters and other industrial vehicles. As a result, the less you use your body for work, the longer you live.
In conclusion, I think that technology helps us to live longer.it made a revolution in our medicals and abolish our traditional means of surviving. Human is one of the weakest mammals on the planet, but his intelligence is the bright one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 22.412803532 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1373.03311258 151% => OK
No of words: 394.0 270.72406181 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26903553299 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04215107975 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 145.348785872 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611675126904 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 419.366225166 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0366009386 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210397642739 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591162820987 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737849518561 0.0662205650399 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16229674336 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697365652672 0.0443174109184 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 63.6247240618 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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