It is no doubt for youngsters to select their profession by themselves. Some people believes the better choice for young man and women is listen the advises from their parents and teachers. From my perspective, young fellows could make decision by themselves but have to discuss it with parents and teachers as much as possible. I will share my opinions in this essay.
First and foremost, youngsters would take responsibilities if the decision made by themselves so that young people could have chance to gain the sense of achievement. Career life is like the combination of confronting vary problems that school leavers could face it everyday. It is hard for young fellows to have brave to make judgement even the very step of choice that made it by others. For example, if the new tasks of a young doctor is handling a emergency situation, with enough knowledge base but less practice, we still expect he or she can make right decision to save a life, there is no time to listen others suggestion.
We also understand that teachers and parents are having experiences that ready to share and teach. Generally, the duty of ones is helping youngsters to do the right thing at right time with great decision, especially ones knew personality and behavior of young people very well so that the teachers and parents are able to select the matchable career for young ones. The future of career life will become bright and shining.
In conclusion, youngsters should listen to others opinions such as parents and teachers but make the decision by themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'listened'.
Suggestion: listened
...etter choice for young man and women is listen the advises from their parents and teac...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...blems that school leavers could face it everyday. It is hard for young fellows to have b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...new tasks of a young doctor is handling a emergency situation, with enough knowle...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68668237183 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3717999004 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227471513994 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858143326201 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785644638173 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155092492313 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787840808753 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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