Although food is the basic necessity oh human being and despite having tremendous advancement in agricultural field, people around the world still facing many serious problems. It is a worrying sign when in spite of having high technologies in agricultural field, many countries in the world suffers from hunger.According to many studies, famine and climate change in many countries are the main reason of above problem.
First of all, when we discuss about famine, capitalization and over population are the main reasons of this. For example, India is a rich country in terms of agricultural land and advancement in the same field. But because of the capitalization of the crops, numerous people are forced to sleep without eating food. Furthermore, over population of country is the other most serious reason of famine. For instance, until few years back China was not able to meet food demand of Chinese population. Although China is a big country having 70% of its agricultural land, still they faced famine for many years.
In many countries due to the climate issues agricultural imbalanced occur. Like in many south countries, there is no rain at all.In some places it is flood.In both cases the crops are getting waste.
It is possible to address this problem by education , collaboration and implementing few rules.To overcome with population issue government could pass some rules. Like in China, government passed the rule of having one child per family. Capitalization should be treated as a crime in country like India.
In the conclusion, with the help of collaboration of big and wealthy countries, could solve the issue. Big countries should help small countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, so, still, for example, for instance, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21691176471 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93439288809 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4903655952 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153787854951 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470702816767 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421011398474 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075330025986 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594640499143 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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