Dear Ms. Charitha,
I, Divya, parent of Shalini, who is studying 4th grade in your school, writing this letter to get some valuable information regarding the trip to Italy, which is scheduled for December 2019.
Firstly, I am keen to know about the number of confirmed participants so far. Next, you have mentioned in the brochure that two parents can join the trip as guides and caretakers. Lastly, as it is an international trip will you provide the necessary things which a student has to purchase beforehand or is it completely parents’ choice of what should be packed?
I am interested to be the caretaker along with the staff of the school because I have a clear idea about the city, Rome and the nearby cathedrals as I visited twice on the business purpose. Moreover, I know how to handle the children if their parents are far away from them as I work as a guide in India.
I can assist the teachers in arranging the children class wise. Moreover, being a doctor by profession, I could help in a medical emergency.
I hope to receive a positive response from your end.
Yours sincerely,
Divya Reddy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79081632653 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75651418836 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7428185056 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248154581008 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727528193899 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808580642529 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107955034062 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935144308446 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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