Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage: long-standing misconceptions in elephants has led to several beliefs about surprising elephant behaviors. 1- Elephants Are Aware of Approaching Death 2- Representing Objects through Art 3- Fear of Mice
The reading and the lecture are both about elephant behaviors, which are fascinated by some people, assuming elephants have high intelligent. The author of the reading believes there are three cases of unusual characteristics of elephants. The lecturer challenges that statements made by the author. she is of the opinion that they are caused by misunderstandings.
First of all, the author suggest that elephants predict and know their incoming death. it is mentioned that when elephants realize that their death is approaching, they stay away from their herd and come closer to bodies of water. that's the reason why many sites of old elephant bones are found. The argument is refuted by the lecturer. she says the reason is more practical reason. Furthermore, she argues that when elephants are old, their tooth are worn down. As a result, they look for soft vegetables, and such soft vegetables are found near water.
Secondly, the article posits that elephants have talent of painting. The author notes elephants are able to draw paintings by their trunks, and their paintings are sometimes recognizable. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by asserting that most elephants that can draw are trained by humans. she elaborates on this by mentioning that the ears of elephants are very sensitive, and trainers teach them to paint which they don't consciously aware of by striking their ears.
Finally, it is stated in the reading that elephants are afraid of mice. The author establishes that there is a known case that herd of elephants were backed away upon seeing mice. The lecturer, on the other hand, opposes that the fear is not caused by mice themselves. she puts forth the idea that this behavior of elephants is caused by their unfamiliarity with mice. In fact, elephants in the place where mice are common don't even react to mice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f unusual characteristics of elephants. The lecturer challenges that statements mad...
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...ges that statements made by the author. she is of the opinion that they are caused ...
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... predict and know their incoming death. it is mentioned that when elephants realiz...
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...erd and come closer to bodies of water. thats the reason why many sites of old elepha...
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...erd and come closer to bodies of water. thats the reason why many sites of old elepha...
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...he argument is refuted by the lecturer. she says the reason is more practical reaso...
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...ts that can draw are trained by humans. she elaborates on this by mentioning that t...
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... fear is not caused by mice themselves. she puts forth the idea that this behavior ...
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...ants in the place where mice are common dont even react to mice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, look, second, secondly, so, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 306.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03594771242 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68497813924 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4139192553 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.05 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237092504009 0.272083759551 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761684829586 0.0996497079465 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530099007739 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154246921043 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425973551388 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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