The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
One of the main challenges of our modern society consists in being able to educate and prepare young generations to future leadership roles, which should be virtuous and exemplar, in order to help the society itself to thrive and flourish. Several actors are involved in this task: from schools to institutions, from teachers to families, everyone plays a role in determining how our future leaders will be shaped. However, which is the best strategy to achieve an effective and equitable leadership in the diverse sectors of society? The presented claim gives a clue about the answer.
Personally, I agree about the necessity of teaching young generations the development of cooperation more than the one of competition. The word "leader" itself bears a complex meaning, which overcomes the simple concept of "ruling": a leader should be able to inspire people, helping them to reach their full potential and to express their very peculiar qualities, which obviously vary from person to person. Therefore, being able to cooperate, making out of each personal ability a resource is the most important characteristic a leader should master. A complex society such is the contemporary one needs articulate solutions to intricate problems and a single man or woman is not able to figure them out by him or herself only. For example, to run a business effectively today it will be needed an economist, a marketer, a communicator, a designer, HR personnel and many other figures who are required to cooperate in order to reach a shared goal.
Moreover, if youngsters are taught the value of cooperation, I believe that many of the struggles afflicting nowadays minorities will be be surpassed. Consider, for instance, the empowerment of women: only overcoming prejudice and sexual discrimination, future leaders will be able to make advantage of an important contribution such as the one of women. An analogous discourse could be carried out for other minorities, too many times left unheard or neglected, fact that led to neglect important voices and minds which could have been useful. If people are given the opportunity to share their knowledge in a safe, enhancing environment, I am sure we will be able to find solutions also to problems at the moment incomprehensible for us. But to do this, we must embrace cooperation in diversity.
Given this is my position, I acknowledge nonetheless the importance of a healthy and structured competition. In fact, it in undeniable that instilling a sense of competition at some point in life could help people - workers or students - to find the right motivation to strive for their best. Especially at school, I believe that sometimes competition can be a useful trigger to make the laziest students become dedicate, because almost everybody enjoy winning or at least trying to. However, such kind of competition should be strictly ruled and instrumental only to motivate people; when competition becomes a way to weaken each other's potential or when, in order to win, deceit and misbehavior are used, then it represents a harmful waste of time.
To conclude, the primary objective of nowadays' society is to empower its individuals and not to divide them. To do so, cooperation is undoubtedly the best way to achieve the result and to ascribe it to an orchestrated effort, not to the merit of only one puissant individual. It is vital teaching younger generations the value of diversity and guiding them towards an effective management and integration of it, exploiting every bit of originality to elaborate new solutions and answers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to afflict'.
Suggestion: to afflict
...n, I believe that many of the struggles afflicting nowadays minorities will be be surpasse...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...les afflicting nowadays minorities will be be surpassed. Consider, for instance, the ...
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Line 13, column 752, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it represents a harmful waste of time. To conclude, the primary objective of no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, then, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3032.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 583.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20068610635 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13764676685 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 315.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540308747856 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 986.4 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0530755423 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.380952381 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7619047619 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175939370503 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500336649348 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426665276936 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954092673145 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152994946966 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 168.0 100.480337079 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.