Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' jobs.Use specific reasons and examples to supp

Grammar and spelling errors:
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deciding what job to choose is one of life more ...
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... parents or different one.im my openion i prefer children choose job similer to t...
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....im my openion i prefer children choose job similer to their parents jobs.i fell th...
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...hoose job similer to their parents jobs.i fell this way for tow reasons ,which i ...
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...nts jobs.i fell this way for tow reasons ,which i will explore in the following es...
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....i fell this way for tow reasons ,which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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... will explore in the following essay. first of all, parents will be more intrested ...
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...ence the difficulty and load of this job ,also they will be much happy and greatfu...
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...much happy and greatfull for this choice ,so they will provide more effort to ease...
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...se the road for child to go for this job .my personal experience is acompelling ex...
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...xperience is acompelling example of this ,about sex years ago i started study in m...
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...ng example of this ,about sex years ago i started study in medical college to get...
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... father job whichs is doctor of medicine , it was a wonderfull journy and my fathe...
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... and my father support me in every step i took , he provided me advices , money a...
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...y father support me in every step i took , he provided me advices , money and ever...
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...e in every step i took , he provided me advices , money and every thing i want , he was...
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...ery step i took , he provided me advices , money and every thing i want , he was h...
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...ided me advices , money and every thing i want , he was happy in all my journy so...
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...e advices , money and every thing i want , he was happy in all my journy so were i...
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...want , he was happy in all my journy so were i . secondly, parents well help ther...
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... he was happy in all my journy so were i . secondly, parents well help there ch...
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...s happy in all my journy so were i . secondly, parents well help there children in st...
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...n in studying and learn the skill of job , if they stock in proplem they will suup...
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...experience to get out from this struggle , so the child will learn skills of the j...
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... the child will learn skills of the job more faster and precise .for instant , when i was s...
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...kills of the job more faster and precise .for instant , when i was studying my fat...
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...job more faster and precise .for instant , when i was studying my father kept chec...
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... faster and precise .for instant , when i was studying my father kept checking me...
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... studying my father kept checking me if i need any help in understanding the conc...
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...ding the concepts and explanation of job , and know i practice my job and my fathe...
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...e concepts and explanation of job , and know i practice my job and my father help me...
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...cepts and explanation of job , and know i practice my job and my father help me t...
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...now the skills of reading blood pressure , check sugar level , examine the patient...
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...ading blood pressure , check sugar level , examine the patients and many other thi...
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...amine the patients and many other things . in conclusion iam of the openion that...
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...child better to choose their parents job ,this is because he gets alot of support...
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...nts job ,this is because he gets alot of support and advices ,and because gets mo...
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...use he gets alot of support and advices ,and because gets more help and skills i...
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...s ,and because gets more help and skills in proplem he faces .
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...ore help and skills in proplem he faces .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50326797386 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37798625809 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.1344086022 377% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 194.800539014 48.9658058833 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.5 100.406767564 343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.5 20.6045352989 371% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.25 5.45110844103 353% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260211794222 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194687869712 0.076458572812 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094352554174 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194687869712 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094352554174 0.0645574589148 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.0 11.7677419355 323% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.26 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.1575268817 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.0537634409 322% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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