It is a common phenomenon that in some countries, especially in developed countries, the age gap between generations is increasingly bigger than it used to be. From my perspective, it is beneficial for both parents and children.
It is undeniable that the difference in age may bring some disadvantages. First of all, for mothers, birthing children in relatively old age means they might face a high risk. For example, their physical organism may not be as strong as when they were young and the children could be unhealthy as others. Besides, when their children still need to take care, other couples’ children already grow up and they have a chance to enjoy their retired life. And also, they may have different opinions about some questions which may lead to a greater gap.
Although there are a few disadvantages, I still believe a greater age difference benefit a lot. Couples who birth children late usually means they save enough money and have a rounded preparation. They have the ability to provide children with rich material life and good qualified education. Parents experience more and they can teach children more. Growing in a good family atmosphere is also helpful for children to develop a positive attitude. Experienced parents usually set good examples for children. In this way, the younger generation tends to get well-rounded development and accomplish achievement in the right direction.
In conclusion, I argue that a bigger age difference between the two generations is helpful for both parents and children. It can be regarded as a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14341085271 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94506571311 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3785591673 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225902891945 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815536962714 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619963672012 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16245919836 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423783062413 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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