It is controversial whether we no longer need printed books because we have access to an electronic version easily online. From my perspective, printed books are still necessary.
It is undeniable that these days as the development of technology and the Internet, we can browse through any book whenever we like through our phone or tablets. For example, we can read an electronic novel on the train or the airplane. And also it is handier to get information in our spare time. We do not need to carry on the books all the time. In a digital era, we just need to type on the keywords, we can get an amount of related information so that we have more opportunity to chose the useful one.
Although we can gain information online, books are still important. Take the old generation as an example, they had a habit of reading printed books, magazines, and newspapers for many years. It is hard to change in a short period of time. Besides, printed books are more authentic and reliable compared to the electronic version. The printed books must under strict censorship. Moreover, a real book brings us a special feeling. Some people enjoy the smell of books and enjoy touching books. Additionally, a child can read a printed cartoon book again and again. It is helpful to remember the number and the alphabet.
In conclusion, in spite of the popularity of electronic books, printed books cannot be replaced completely, as they still benefit us a lot in modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... years. It is hard to change in a short period of time. Besides, printed books are more authen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74901960784 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75309758787 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2797312231 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2352941176 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241311493932 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865629784406 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583749427282 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16146395255 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587934099548 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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