You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Sajad,
Hope you are going great. I am delight to inform you that I have recently relocated from my old place.
Let me explain my situation in more detail that moving to new place has many reasons. Firstly, the old house was not spacious and had parking issues all the time. Secondly, there was plumbing difficulties which tried to be repaired plenty of moments but couldn't be restored.
About new area where we shifted is providing a plethora of facilities namely availability of playground all the 24 hours, supermarket is at walking distance. Building management assists in numerous aspects such as if there will be any hurdle with maintenance they are there for round O'clock and the last but not least, sunset and sunrise view is incredible from our windows.
I would like to visit our place and stay with us for few days so you will have the opportunity to explore.
I will be waiting for your response.
Your friend,
Iqbal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ed to be repaired plenty of moments but couldnt be restored. About new area where...
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Line 13, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: O'clock
...th maintenance they are there for round Oclock and the last but not least, sunset and ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99386503067 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55764214971 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723926380368 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9331411809 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183386527457 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781230010478 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710354785206 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846515213291 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491044464732 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.