In many countries both men and women are working full time , therefore it is logical for men and women to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree?
In some countries, working permanently for both men and women is mandatory which insists them to delegate household stuffs equally. In my opinion, I completely agree that delegation between couples should be maintained.
Number of people believe that it is a common trend to have job for both the partners in a relationship. In other words, both male and female go for work as it is necessary to cover all the expenses of day-to-day life and this is only possible when both the partners will earn some money. By doing this, they are able to divide all the costs who are not only manage expenses but also save some money for their future. For example, it is seen that people who share things in a balanced way are much more successful than those who do not like to participate.
Another possible reason is that people who use divide and rule formula in expenses are healthier than those who do not utilise this criteria. In an elaborate way , individuals who have this routine of sharing are less stressful because they do not need to struggle to cover whatever expenses they have. Such method could be supportive to overcome stress level and might lead to happier life. Furthermore, being happier in life is every one's motive, therefore by using this approach there will be less medical problem which consequently produces better results not only to these persons but also to society.
In conclusion, while some people may vary in their opinions, I consider that delegation is an essential process in today's era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...lieve that it is a common trend to have job for both the partners in a relationship...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...healthier than those who do not utilise this criteria. In an elaborate way , individ...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In an elaborate way" with adverb for "elaborate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...those who do not utilise this criteria. In an elaborate way , individuals who have this routine of ...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ilise this criteria. In an elaborate way , individuals who have this routine of sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87307692308 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55812481784 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7796656001 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.181818182 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152863582951 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058617914921 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679019108302 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925172610581 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081446304987 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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