Some people think sport is important to society. Other, however, feel it is nothing more than leisure activity.Discuss both views and give opinion.

Sport is utmost essential for the mental as well as the physical development of an individual.Few thinks that indoor and outdoor game is necessary to community. While others believe it is nothing more than free time activity. This essay will be discussing both the view and my point-view further.

To begin with,games are very important for society because it is not only useful for the mankind to represent their talent at global level but also useful to earn money.To elaborate the above mentioned statement,youngsters can build their career in sport and they will get respect and prestige in society. Person can choose the field as a career to earn money. For instance,many people love to play cricket in their early career,they continue their interest and build career in it and become successful sport person in society. Moreover,competition between to community would be create strong bond wih eachother.

On the other hand,some people used to play games during free time to reduce the stress and spend the time with family. In the contemporary epoch,everybody is busy in the life due to that they can not spend time with their relatives. People also used to play games during leisure time to reduce the stress which is helpful to maintain mental as well as physical health.To exemplify,i used to play indoor and outdoor games whenever i get time from my academic career to spend time with my friend and family.

To recapitulate, athletics are essential part of human daily routine.I believe that every person should play games to maintain the healthy life.It is not only beneficial for mental situation but also help to gain fitness.parents should encourage their children toward sport for better career as well as health.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10175438596 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90914225311 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5546521595 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.181818182 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14071181536 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063235303315 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071140033692 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096741021448 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959045932592 0.056905535591 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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