Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the word becomes increasingly civilized, there is a competition between human beings who want to be successful in their lives. In this day and age people create a great condition for themselves to achieve their main goals. Many people deem that today universities should not require history courses since it does not have benefits, on the other hand , most people think that history plays crucial role in our lives and we should learn it even at university. Although not surprisingly, number of controversies over the issue is overwhelming, actually I concur with people who believe that today history is not essential for bright future. I will delve the most outstanding ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the first important point is interest, which let human recognize that this thing what he learn is beneficial for his career in the future.Due to this fact, if person does not have own desire to do something , he can not concentrate on it . I have to admit that my opinion in this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, since I study in engineering group this year, I have no problems with biology classes.Of course, I did my all home assignments , wrote all my exams for hundred percent , however now I could not remember anything about this subject. Therefore, I can surely say that if student do not think that this subject is significant for him , he will study only for marks.
Another equally vital reason that should be highlighted here is time, which each lesson require. Even though in this century we have technology , which does our household work , we live in a century in which people compete with each others for best life , so people do not have extra time for taking courses which will not brings us benefits.
Admittedly taking history courses to some extent, has it's undeniable detriment.no one could omit the fact that history is our ancestors who gave us bright life. however , compared to its pros which would do good to people's life , it's con become pale.
In light of al aforementioned reasons , it is explicitly obvious that universities should not require history classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, so, therefore, of course, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93131868132 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73082096603 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585164835165 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2473682602 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.214285714 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192703423009 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666227622577 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432307059447 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112255020329 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030808732748 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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