Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Most people treat scientific research and development as the tools and help for advance of their nations, and give their government the power to direct, shape, and restrain it. Although it is partly true as every development is for the need of human, such as convenience of our lives or simply curiosity, the authority should never place restrictions on them, except for ethical issues.
First, the limits given by the governments may lead the progress toward wrong direction. If there are some bounds in a field of research, say technology, the experts will try to fit the wants of the government ...
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Sentence: Take gravitation law of Newton for example, not like the image as a scientists in the minds of most people, the great law was found through a hit of apple, while the public considered that the brilliant ideas most be shapes in experiments will good facility such computers.
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Suggestion: Refer to will and good
Sentence: For the same reason, what the government as well as the population considered as good way to research could be just not as good as a apple tree for the most important scienctists as Newton.
Error: scienctists Suggestion: scientists
Sentence: The confined development may not be as succeessful as those advance on their own ways, taking their own time.
Error: succeessful Suggestion: successful
Sentence: These confines give the restictions on scientific researches and development.
Error: restictions Suggestion: restrictions
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