Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Being guileless is one the most perennial ingredient of any kind of relationship among people, yet there has been a fierce debate about whether being honest in all circumstances. Mindful of the effects which not being righteous can have on people, I believe to forge a real, harmonious relationship everyone must observe honesty. There are innumerable important reasons for the very argue, two of which are discussed in this essay.
As mentioned in most religious books, “Trust is the foremost keystone of any relationship.” Only by behaving truly and not lying can one gain people’s trust and forge a trusted relationship with them. In other words, if a person does not feel obliged to observe honesty in some situations and allow himself or herself to conceal the truth to gain benefits for themselves, then, their friends or partners would not be able to distinguish between their right and wrong words. As a result, they would not manage to establish a true relationship with heartfelt trust in their lives.
Secondly, in today’s complex, intertwined world, no single deed is completely independent of other ones. Hence, in the case of lying in a specific situation, one would need to tell the “constructed” truth about relative events. Therefore, it necessitates more lies, and not only does the very complexity aggravate the situations but also it turns the person to a real lier. Naturally, there may not be a real, trustful relationship in these kinds of people, since, eventually, the truth will be dawn on their friends and they will lose their trust on the person.
To sum up, it would be definitely obvious that more important than any other consideration is observing truthfulness in any condition by virtue of the profound importance of honesty in forging relationships and the high dependence of events in the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, kind of, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20462046205 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18590757555 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5170931505 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.363636364 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17179951536 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635918921378 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558616439852 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117036379078 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527932494362 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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