A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
I disagree with the opinion that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. As we see in this world, we are growing and advancing at a rapid rate, where we all develop certain interests and affinity towards our chosen field of study or passion, which is the key driving force in individuals to follow their interests and make it big.
We see that if a person or an individual is good at history, and the national curriculum requires him/ her to study science and math, it would become something which might hold the individual from the interest that they have, as wee see if he is not good at it, then he/ she might end up with a low performance in that course, whereas the same individual will be scoring excellent in history. but the poor grades in other subjects might demotivate him/ her and make them think that their overall performance in all the subjects is poor.
If we take the example of Albert Einstein, when he was young, his teachers used to complain that he was not a good student who excelled at subjects and had poor grades, but when he grew up, we know what all he has done and achieved. Had he be given a choice of studying the subjects where he was good at and introduce similar subjects, he might have end up performing the best in his class and prepared him more for the future.
Similarly, when we take an example of the bollywood actor Arjun Kapoor, he flunked his 12th grade, but when we see him today, he is one of the most finest actors in the young generation of bollywood. who knew that he would become such a good actor.
As we know see that there were distinguished people, who upon following and learning the same national curriculum before college were not as good as we see them now.
What we can do is to introduce subjects in the curriculum, which are important for shaping the individual for specific knowledge and traits that will help in various aspects of life. Rather than burdening him/ her with a mix of subjects that they find difficult to grasp. we can provide them with a similar mix that is offered in college and at a basic level, where they can follw what they find interesting and sparks their inner core when they are lerning what they want. this will help in recognizing talent at a very young age and help them shape themselves into performers of tomorrow
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...terests and affinity towards our chosen field of study or passion, which is the key d...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...l will be scoring excellent in history. but the poor grades in other subjects might...
^^^
Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[4]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...at all he has done and achieved. Had he be given a choice of studying the subjects...
^^
Line 11, column 144, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'finest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: finest
...when we see him today, he is one of the most finest actors in the young generation of bolly...
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Line 11, column 144, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the finest'.
Suggestion: most the finest
...when we see him today, he is one of the most finest actors in the young generation of bolly...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 201, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...s in the young generation of bollywood. who knew that he would become such a good a...
^^^
Line 11, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s in the young generation of bollywood. who knew that he would become such a good a...
^^^
Line 19, column 273, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ects that they find difficult to grasp. we can provide them with a similar mix tha...
^^
Line 19, column 475, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...e when they are lerning what they want. this will help in recognizing talent at a ve...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 33.0505617978 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53348729792 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42289366893 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487297921478 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.2128137553 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3076923077 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147435674286 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701499399686 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111397111585 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895047397553 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803151380837 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.