Cars are considered optimum mode of transportation by certain individuals to travel in a city, whereas others opine bicycle for the same purpose. I personally agree with the later viewpoint owing to couple of factors and I intend to discuss both sides.
To begin with one side, cars are the comfortable means of transportation since one can move to desirable destination despite having poor weather conditions such as rain or soaring heat of Sun which is certainly not possible by bicycles. Consequently, people prefer to go by cars even for short distances. Apart from this, it is a remarkable way through which all family members can visit together to desirable place within hometown. The reason being, cars are spacious enough to carry four to five people that one can have an opportunity to spend quality time with loved ones for instance as per your server 50% of the people, nowadays, in
travel by car in the city so that they can have get together with their loved ones as no one has time tgese days for families due to hectic schedule.
On the contrary, majority of the persons consider bicycle more effective, for it is the cheapest vehicle as well as does not require any fuel including petrol or diesel to work. Eventually, hard earned money can be saved, if individual use two wheelers for travelling in the city premises. Moreover, in modern time people have become environment friendly due to warning given by pollution control department. It is,therefore, believed to be necessary by them to utilise cycles because cars and other automobiles are the main sources of air pollution an in turnn various ailments be it asthma and skin allergies.
In conclusion,although cars help family members to travel together and have comfort zone in comparison to bicycles, I think notion of travelling by bicycle is more far more superior on account of countless benefits to environment and to masses themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0031152648 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86905232838 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4541859263 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4545454545 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20293241466 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702538382394 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327518715664 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111646185694 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260755339361 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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