Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the importance of the role which advertising plays in modern society. The advertisement target all the individuals ranging from two years old to the elderly. A controversial question that is often raised in this regard is whether the advertisement should be allowed or not, to target the kids. I strongly believe that they should be restricted since kids have not the experience to distinguish good from bad, also they are more emotional, and eventually, it is not a fair action.
First and foremost, it is crystal clear that kids, aged two to five, in particular, have a naive personality. They could not realize that advertisements are for financial purposes. Take the enormous doll business, for example, the advertisers put the tiser between the cartoons, which are so popular by the kids. By seeing these tempting programs, kids insist that they should have that item.
Another equally important aspect of the advertisement is that they target the emotional sense of the babies. In this age, the intellectual sense has not improved enough, so the advertisement industry by knowing that affect the children. Parents and TV authorities should manage strict rules so that financial inducements could not deceive innocent kids.
Last but not least, the more children sit in front of the TV the more they become affected by commercial programs. Therefore, It is recommended that parents provide some useful materials to entertain children. Physical activities besides educational programs ought to be provided, in order to fulfil the spare time of the kids.
For the matter of conclusion, considering the mentioned reasons, I think it is now clear that parents have a significant role in the prevention of the children from seeing every advertisement. Although it was a story in a nutshell, and there are other reasons that should be considered. All in all, censorship is required by the parents or the TV channels; especially, in times of children's program. These restrictive actions not only prohibit children from deceiving adds but also provide other methods of entertainment like active actions, Which definitely helps children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24216524217 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96916674662 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552706552707 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3003540559 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147149456311 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482736376873 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280969955695 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082072408874 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172312271634 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.