Nowadays, people consume more and more junk foods because of modern era, even they eat to imported food from various nations. Which lead to multiple pros and cons. Thus, I will discuss my view points in up coming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are many benefits of importing food from different countries but first and foremost is that if people eat various types of foreign foods, then they will get a chance to learn other nation traditional and cultural food which is immensely helpful for making stronger relationship among the people. Apart from this, if people exchange their foods with the help of exporting as well as importing, then nation's economy will be exchanged, and other nation's inhabitants learn to make different types of mouth watering dishes.
On the other side, there are numerous drawbacks of this trend. Firstly, if youngsters give more importance to other nation's foods, then they can forget their own culture and traditional foods as well. Which leads to various bad impacts on their progress and moral path. Moreover, nowadays, various foods are imported from one to another countries, and teenagers easily eat to overseas food items sans any difficulty owing to this, sometimes, they will suffer from health problems such as obesity and they can become habitual of overeating. As a result, sometimes, if their parents stop them for eating these foods, then they can fight with them and it give birth to much conflict between kids and parents.
To sum up, although it has various benefits on masses but, I believe that it's disadvantages are outnumber from it advantages.
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
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Suggestion: outnumbered
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, apart from, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09056603774 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49196644448 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.6712491863 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227644056489 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081135120983 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609806327194 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130321371478 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358035468773 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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