Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Where you live is one of the most powerful factors that make your life happy. For me, if I had a chance to choose my town where I will live, I would definitely prefer a small community. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, being in a small city enables me to communicate every single person, thus it becomes a more convenient environment for me like being at my home. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Five years ago, for the first time, I got a chance to study abroad as my bachelor degree. I was so thrilled and a little bit scared of it because I knew that I would enter the whole new community and be far away from my parents. However, ever since I arrived in Russian small city, I felt that I was at my home. The most favourite part of my life during that time was that every morning I went to my university, everyone greeted me by calling my name. Hence, If I had decided to study in a big city, it would have become a disaster for me because it might take a long time to adapt to the big town.
In the top of this, there are plenty of opportunities in the small city on account of its low population. For the university’s life, there would be less competition among my peers and more opportunity to be recognised and be appreciated by my professors. This unique advantages enormously helped me to stand out from my classmates and succeed in my career. Drawing from my own experience, when I was in university, every professor knew me very well and helped me to begin my career from a high position. What I mean by that they paid a lot of attention on my resumes and advocated me to companies. Thanks to their efforts, I easily hired in the high-prestigious factory as a food specialist. Then I was promoted as a manager in this factory and was offered a lot of well-paid jobs in the capital city. Nevertheless, I did not want to leave my small city because this town’s residents created today’s me and I had debt them for this. It goes without saying that today I run my private business in this town and have created hundreds of jobs for my local inhabitants to thrive in this society.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that small town is a far better place to live than a big city. This is because it allows you to intricate with everyone in this town and this is because there are numerous chances to stick out from others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where you live is one of the most powerful fa...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...achelor degree. I was so thrilled and a little bit scared of it because I knew that I woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, i feel, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34334763948 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70116443475 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497854077253 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.792232067 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.380952381 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1904761905 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121626394356 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485079868842 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074949272958 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12084742123 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867429518334 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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