People no longer use newspapers and televisions because the internet plays the same role. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Majority
...down on the newspaper/television habbit.Majority of them use internet as a source of inf...
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Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , newspapers
...is essay agrees that in this digital age,newspapers and tv is a past era commodity,However,...
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Suggestion: , However
...ewspapers and tv is a past era commodity,However,one should not neglect the downside of ...
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Suggestion: Likewise
...internet has brought in our daily lives.Likewise,it has made changes to the way we watch...
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Suggestion: , it
... has brought in our daily lives.Likewise,it has made changes to the way we watch ne...
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Suggestion: Since
... television set or read it in newspaper.Since every piece of information is in your h...
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Suggestion: , you
...f information is in your handheld device,you could use it anywhere and anytime.Secon...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...e,you could use it anywhere and anytime.Secondly,one can comment and share their thought...
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Suggestion: , one
...uld use it anywhere and anytime.Secondly,one can comment and share their thoughts on...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...nt social forums and critically analyze those news. However,this has also risen an i...
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Suggestion: , this
...ically analyze those news. However,this has also risen an issue of fact checkin...
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Suggestion: Many
... checking of news on social media sites.Many political parties use these social medi...
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Suggestion: Since
...ead fake news to malign their opponents.Since digital news forums are still a new inv...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...s.Since digital news forums are still a new invention,therefore,many of its aspects are not f...
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Suggestion: , therefore
...al news forums are still a new invention,therefore,many of its aspects are not federally r...
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Suggestion: For
...its aspects are not federally regulated.For instance,conservative party in 2016 ele...
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Suggestion: , conservative
...are not federally regulated.For instance,conservative party in 2016 election was accused of s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ies about their counterpart democrats. Therefore we cannot ignore to rely on the centu...
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Line 7, column 457, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
.... Therefore we cannot ignore to rely on the centuries old newspapers and televis...
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Line 7, column 555, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: These
...ecking the information around the world.These means of information are still very muc...
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Line 7, column 555, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this means' or 'These means'?
Suggestion: This means; These means
...ecking the information around the world.These means of information are still very much regu...
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Suggestion: , I
...rminate their licenses. In conclusion,I believe internet plays a vital role in ...
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Suggestion: However
...in shaping the reality we live in today.However,we should not ignore the benefit of tra...
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Suggestion: , we
...ing the reality we live in today.However,we should not ignore the benefit of tradit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59107806691 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.87570314761 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.87238431 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.666666667 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8333333333 20.7667163134 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6666666667 7.06120827912 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171552082751 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911431892428 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535296925633 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103735370989 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631419973698 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.