People no longer use newspapers and televisions because the internet plays the same role. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people prefer to read news and entertain from the internet instead of from television and newspaper. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the usage of the internet for reading news and entertainment is now much more than the past decades and the supporting points will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, almost every people now have Wi-Fi access in their homes and there are plethora of websites that offer free daily news by only registering on their web pages. Some news sites like The Hindu, The Indian Times and many others print a complete newspaper in various formats so that it is easy for everyone to read on devices like cell-phones, I pads, and laptops. Moreover, news channels are making their services paperless and promoting the use of their websites in online mode so that the use of paper can be saved.
On the other hand, television remains an entertainment channel for a long time but with the easy accessibility of the internet, the scope of watching TV is now decreased at a major level. Even young children have their cell phones, which they are using for watching sports and their favorite channels. In addition, if someone is traveling and wants to see any show program on time, just by clicking on the internet option on the mobile, it is easy to watch.
To conclude, the internet has revolutionized traditional methods by providing similar or enhanced services. Many are preferring e-subscriptions of newspapers and watching their favorite channels online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01968503937 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76389449477 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8332775453 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111101366751 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468683215153 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236080926687 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699032928126 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184259775208 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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