Children in many countries are getting fat and less fit day by day. Why is it so and what are the possible solutions?
Youngsters these days are getting more prone to obesity and suffer from lower overall fitness levels,a trend common to many nations.This precursor of deteriorating physiques is attributable to lifestyle and dietary choices .The situation although alarming can be tackled by way of making teenagers aware of benefits of taking nutritional foods on their general well being .
It is a visual when children thronging to fast food outlets to grab their favourite hamburger or French fries.These are often loaded with unhealthy preservatives doing more harm than good to belly fat. It is this intake of junk food that is causing fat to deposit in their adipose tissueand making them gain weight.Another reason is sedentary routines of today's youth characterized by low physical activity and reliance on indoor games . This further inhibits movement making them gain weight .
The menace can be curtailed by actively engaging teenagers in some form task requiring bodily motion and grading them on the basis of health quotient apart from academic parameters.Moreover,sports should be made compulsary subject in curriculum with extra weightage given to students who are leaner .The dependence of teenagers on quick unhealthy diets can be reduced by educating them about their enhanced susceptibility to possible infections and diseases in the long term.
The potential unforseen dangers of poor fitness levels and accumulation of fat is undoubtedly a cause of concern for nations at the macro level as it is the youth that will make country progressive .However,with inculcation of prompt and proactive dietary patterns and making relevant changes in day to day activities focused on physical training the situation can be curtailed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56554307116 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17146268825 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.365960008 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 247.666666667 106.682146367 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5 20.7667163134 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134792854486 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586824919636 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540469488548 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800693537106 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530370026706 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.26 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.