Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern society, it is a norm that bother parents are employed in order to earn a satisfactory income for the family. Some people claim that child care institute is an ideal place to keep their child until they finish work, while others argue that family relatives are better carers. This essay will discuss both arguments before a reasoned opinion is reached.
On the one hand, toddlers receive the tending of trained experts at child care institutes. The employees of day-care institutes have been trained to attend to requirements of kids professionally. This can be considered as a quite valuable skill. When the standards of the facilities is satisfactory and there are enough skilled child care specialists, the child would be in safe hands while it's parents are away at work.
On the other hand, being with family members could grant many benefits to the child. Close relatives such as grandparents are respected as persons who love their grandchildren as much as their loved their own children. They have cared for their children once so with that experience they know how to bring up their grandchildren to be great personalities in the future. Their love, caring and attention will create a safe environment for the child to stay while it's parents are away, being employed. Unlike child care institutes, grandparents have to attend to one one or two children so that closer attention and consequently, more love, attention and caring is given to them when they are with their grandparents.
In conclusion, I believe that even though the child care institutes are equipped with good facilities and skilled specialists, it is essential that close attention and an immense amount of love and care are given by their family and grandparents.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08620689655 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81059021565 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0905442961 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190167689946 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766553627772 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481486327756 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115408488488 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748410559571 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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