Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Deciding how one should make important decisions is a very important matter. Everyone make decisions daily some of which are very important and detrimental in their future, hence, they should know how they can make the best decisions. Some people may think that making decisions by themselves are better since they are personal issues and are none of anyone's business while others may disagree. In my opinion, important issues should be decided by consulting with others. I feel this way because of two important reasons.
The main reason is that one can benefit other's experiences. Every individual is living his own life and has encountered with different problems and there is no time for everyone to experience every situation. When we consult with someone, they may have similar experiences. They have been in similar situations where they had to decide on various issues, and as a result they have seen the positive and negative consequences of their decisions. When we talk to these people they may share their memoirs and experiences with us which will help us to decide more wisely. For example, last year, I wanted to quit my job and look for another more interesting job. When I told my father about this decision, he talked to me a lot and told me a analogous situation he was in. He was hired by a company when he was young, and since his major and the work he was doing for the company were totally diverse, he quitted his job to look for another but due to our country's problems it was very hard for him to find one. He was looking for a new job before he found one, and in this period, he had a lot of financial problems. Therefore, I decided to find another job before quitting the current position.
The second reason is that one may not be able to see all aspects of his decision because he likes one side more. People often cannot foresee different consequences of their decision when the decision is somehow related to their interests and emotions. Hence, asking others about their opinion on their decisions will help them learn more about unforeseen results of them. For instance, my brother wanted to marry a girl who was not known to be loyal. He was in love with her, while the girl was just hanging out with him to have fun. He talked to me and I told her about the girl and her attitudes which helped him to decide with more insight.
To sum up, though some may disagree, but I deeply believe that a person should always decide about an important issue with consulting with others. Not only does it provide an opportunity to hear other's opinions and experiences but also it helps him to see unforeseen consequences of his decision due to his love. I think everyone should take their time to talk to their friends and family when making an important decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 738, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64848484848 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46761205917 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460606060606 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2078310803 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147496377272 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530862821129 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526810144378 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122737720462 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694317709397 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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