You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed
Dear sir,
I have been loyal customer of your company since long time and I am really dissatisfied toward the service you provided to me. I am penning down this epistle in relation to the bill of RS.5,000 rupees toward international call charges I received yesterday through mail.
Firstly, I would like to inform you that at no time I have avail the international calling services. All my relatives and families are here only and I have made only STD calls. Even I have checked my call history where I have found no incoming or outgoing calls from abroad. Beside this, I have been your well satisfied customer of your company since last 10 years with contact number 9099120200.
I am sure there must be an error while generating bill. I request you to recheck your records and send me the rectified bill for the month of September again so that i can paid it on time. I hope you will go through my account details and do the needful.
Hoping for prompt action from your customer care department. I have already raised query for the same in writing with your nearest store.
Yours Sincerely,
Milan Desai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 167, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or the month of September again so that i can paid it on time. I hope you will go...
^
Line 13, column 173, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'pay'
Suggestion: pay
... month of September again so that i can paid it on time. I hope you will go through ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er again so that i can paid it on time. I hope you will go through my account det...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77664974619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47836369063 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659898477157 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2770778583 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392244027526 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126328150342 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545586383821 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218561470247 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00958427214028 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.