Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoid any change. Other, however, think that change in always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Most people prefer sticking to the daily routine, whereas others always push their boundaries to change the status quo as they believe that the change would bring more benefit. In my opinion, I certainly agree to step outside of comfort zone and try new things.
Beyond doubt, there are are several compelling reasons why some people dare not trying new things and instead, fear embracing the change. Firstly, they seen an intrinsic value in doing the. In other words, They have a lifelong passion for what they do everyday to quote as an instance, a Naval officer is happy with his job despite little earnings what he wishes from his job is the level of satisfaction and recognition. Secondly, others may fear the uncertainty that prevent them from trying new things. For example, a father with infinite family responsibilities may become risk averse because even if he gets convince to change, he would fear if he receives the same amount of earnings and satisfaction that he got in the previous job. Such human psyche itself speaks of why people embrace repetition.
There is school of thought that believes change is imperative. They believe that trying new things could be exciting experience and kill boredom and a sense of complacency. For example, we would not have known much about other planets if astronauts were not sent into the outer space. Additionally, it is believed that making the change in life fortifies talent or characteristics. It simply allows move past their limiting beliefs. It is therefore essential that boundaries and assumptions must be pushed and tested. A sprinter would not know how fast he is until he participate in the competition.
In conclusion. I second my outlook of embracing a change rather than fearing it despite legitimate reason.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: are
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Suggestion: saw
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11824324324 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73428965874 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6224799519 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153450648457 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428882651865 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425811180598 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879768127785 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044800861545 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.