City council is planing to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen you don't want it to happen. Write a letter to a city council and say
What is the importance of the building?
Why should it be renovated?
Suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in future.
Dear sir
I am writing this letter regarding the action that you want to take about historic building. Actually, this is an ancient building and it has historical significance, because it was the house of prime freedom fighters, and now it act as a museum. Hence, it becomes the attraction of visitors to visit this place. That's it plays important role in maintenance of funding for shopkeepers.
This building is too old so the paint of the walls fainting and it needs renovation. As I mentioned earlier, it becomes tourist attraction so it needs reconstruction to make it more eye-catching, also it needs to bring some more ancient stuff to display so it can be more enjoyable and knowledgeable for visitors.
If city council unable to raise proper funds, they can charge reasonable fees to visitors. Moreover, citizens also can provide funds as a volunteer if they will ask to do so. Some NRI people can also share funds to support the city council. It is my humble request to think about our ideas and avoid pull out this significant building. Will be grateful towards you.
Yours faithfully
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e of prime freedom fighters, and now it act as a museum. Hence, it becomes the attr...
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...action of visitors to visit this place. Thats it plays important role in maintenance ...
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...maintenance of funding for shopkeepers. This building is too old so the paint of...
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...joyable and knowledgeable for visitors. If city council unable to raise proper f...
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...eful towards you. Yours faithfully Emily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82013063709 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.25950206 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211844609709 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071897506619 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505386756121 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122743511195 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724217349461 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.