There is no gainsaying that many should be considered for having a appropriate forecasting about the future changes especially for next twenty years. In spite the fact, there are numerous controversial arguments whether the number of the cars will be fewer or more in next twenty years. From my perspective, people will use less cars in that time, because they not only will use other vehicles but also attach a more importance to environmental issues. Moreover, people will care more to their healthy by walking and biking rather than driving. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the pace of changes especially in technology is rapid and it is undeniable that with the advent of new technology in transportation, many numerous and various vehicles will be produced during next decades. In better words, human beings will have a numerous options for choosing as vehicles. For example, some companies are researching to produce commercially some flying vehicle as taxi. Therefore, there is no doubt that cars will be replaced by new vehicles, in this respect, the cars numbers will be declined for future.
Second point that comes to my mind is that one of the major concerning of people is environmental issues. In other words, there is no debate that cars have a crucial role in making air pollution and global warming. There are millions of cars which burn fossil fuels and emit much abundance of carbon dioxide which is harmful for earth. These days, some government impose some strict standards and rules to car producers, but it seems that these rules are not adequate. Hence, people themselves are trying to use less cars for saving the earth and next human beings' generations.
The last but not least, there is no doubt that people have less physical activities that ever before. In better words, the great majority of people are experiencing various sicks caused by sedentary lifestyle. In conclusion, doctors warn to people about this problem and ask them to do some physical activities like biking and jogging. Therefore, people are less likely to use the cars as much as these days.
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned paragraphs, people will use less cars in next twenty years than these days. Therefore, there is no doubt that, the companies will produce less cars, as a result of demand declining.
- TOEFL T P O 32 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 68
- TPO-31- Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to s 83
- TPO 45: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and ex 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...at many should be considered for having a appropriate forecasting about the futur...
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Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s. From my perspective, people will use less cars in that time, because they not onl...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'option'?
Suggestion: option
...ords, human beings will have a numerous options for choosing as vehicles. For example, ...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs numbers will be declined for future. Second point that comes to my mind is th...
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Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ce, people themselves are trying to use less cars for saving the earth and next huma...
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Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...rementioned paragraphs, people will use less cars in next twenty years than these da...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... doubt that, the companies will produce less cars, as a result of demand declining. ...
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Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cars, as a result of demand declining.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0527638191 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6979133878 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0590501635 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.55 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165789858262 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555083274117 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491760147315 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10236610275 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448939739176 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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