TPO 34 Integrated Essay
both reading and lecture are about the reasons of Steller's sea cows. both the auther and the lecturer believe that the reasons are not clear but they talk about three theories.
First of all, the auther mentions that overhunting could be the cause of extinction of cows. he says if it is correct, the population of these kind of marine animals would be large but overhunting could decline the number of them becuase they were good resources of food. The lecturer doesn't agree with this theory and it has for a reason. he believes that these cows were too massive. they were about ten tones so people couldn't take them away the sea and bring them to the village.
Moreover, the article points out the ecosystem diturbances. The writer mentions that the ecosystem disturbances could make decreacing of a particulare marine plant named kelp. it was the main resource of food. The lecturer ignores this theory by mentioning that it wasn't effective for sea cows becuase they have much more food resources. he adds it could be effective for other marine animals like whales.
Finally, the auther adds the third theory which is related to european fur traders. The article points out their catching to the sea and it could be cause of declining of population of cows by hunting. The lecturer rejects this theory by extinct evidences. he says that the ueropean were there just a short period of time and the extinction was long before they arrived there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
both reading and lecture are about the reaso...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
...about the reasons of Stellers sea cows. both the auther and the lecturer believe tha...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...uld be the cause of extinction of cows. he says if it is correct, the population o...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ays if it is correct, the population of these kind of marine animals would be large but ov...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...re good resources of food. The lecturer doesnt agree with this theory and it has for a...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: He
...th this theory and it has for a reason. he believes that these cows were too massi...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: They
...ieves that these cows were too massive. they were about ten tones so people couldnt ...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ve. they were about ten tones so people couldnt take them away the sea and bring them t...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... a particulare marine plant named kelp. it was the main resource of food. The lect...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...nores this theory by mentioning that it wasnt effective for sea cows becuase they hav...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ase they have much more food resources. he adds it could be effective for other ma...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
... their catching to the sea and it could be cause of declining of population of cows by h...
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Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...jects this theory by extinct evidences. he says that the ueropean were there just ...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...at the ueropean were there just a short period of time and the extinction was long before they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, third, as for, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 250.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.812 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38281849917 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0234298756 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1875 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333612876608 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10464925289 0.0996497079465 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645970632806 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200899088911 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517596702394 0.0443174109184 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.