The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980 and 2000, and the world's top ten exporters of fish in 2000 (TiaDS_sample answer)

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The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980 and 2000, and the world's top ten exporters of fish in 2000 (TiaDS_sample answer)

The bar chart illustrates the population of fishers in Asia, Africa, South America, North America and Europe, and is measured in millions from 1970 to 2000. However, the table compares the top ten exporters of fishing in 2000.

It is noticeable that the population of fishers inclines in five countries. However, the number of fishers in Asia dominates and records the top exporters of fishing.

The highest number of fishers was experienced by Asia in 1970. Whereas the figure of Africa, South America stood at around 1.2 million fishers, North America and Europe fishers held the lowest percent...

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