There is no gainsaying that human beings' lives are more sophsiccated than ever before and, the great majority of people are preoccpied by numerous tasks. In this respect, some people believe that people do few things well while other ones have an opposite view. From my perspective view, in spite this fact that people are busy with different and nemurous tasks, they are able to do aboundant things well. The enusing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that schools and society advocate time and effort to teach to people especially youngester some useful charactritics like planing and organizing. In better words, these days people learn to do different and many things during their lives. Schools educate very young students how do some course and exams during a day. For instance, I had had problems with my heavy schedul in my school when I atted schools. Nevertheless, Thanks to our kind teachers, I learnt how to plan and organize for doing many things like playing, doing assinment, being with family etc. when I was in third grade in primary school. Therefore, most of the people are ready for doing various things.
Second point comes to mind is that human beings are social creation and they are able cope with problem by cooperation. In better workds, there is a common consensus among people to help each other for having an efficeint coexistence. For instance, when my neice was born, my brother was resaerching for PHD thesis. Every one, especially himself, thought that he could not finish his reasearch but he could to pass thsis with flying color. Because, his friends support and helped him. Hence, sometimes people are able to do many things well due to team working.
Last but not least, With advent of the technology, there is no doubt that people are able to do many things more efficient. Human beings could have surpass other creaions, because of their intelligece. Thaks to high intelligent widom, human beings have invented useful objects like steam engine, printing maching, computer etc. These days, thechnoly have premates in all aspect of our lives and we use computers for doing either complicated works like mathematic calculus or even simple task like saving notes. As a result, human biengs are able to do various different things more efficient, due to equipment and technology.
In conclusion, contemplating all aformentioned paragraphs, people are capable to do the great majority things well, becuse they can have planing, organizing, team working and use high-tech equipments. There is no doubt that doing some simple things are easier that various things, however, human beings are prominent creation for doing varios complicate things at the same time.
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- TOEFL T P O 32 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opposite view. From my perspective view, in spite this fact that people are busy ...
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Message: Did you mean 'peopling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: peopling
...ciety advocate time and effort to teach to people especially youngester some useful chara...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ings during their lives. Schools educate very young students how do some course a...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'surpassed'.
Suggestion: surpassed
...more efficient. Human beings could have surpass other creaions, because of their intell...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10398230088 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53858450115 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550884955752 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3723003874 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31773092609 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968954862279 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902355616927 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192300680832 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478475120854 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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