You work for an international company. Recently your job has changed and you believe that more training is needed. Write a letter to your manager and say:
How has your job changed?
Describe a type of training you will need.
Suggest the arrangements incorporating training and your work.
Dear Mr. Moore,
I am writing to request you about the additional training which I need in my new role of the Senior Analyst in Payments team in The Royal Bank of Scotland.
I am basically from Invoice Finance team. As you know after filling a job opening I got selected and promoted as a senior analyst in your team, my roles and responsibilities have been entirely changed.
Although class room training has already been given to me but it seems insufficient for performing daily duties which my current profile entails. I would need on-job training of circulation the payments and the basic fundamentals of the flow of funds in overseas.
This process is being handled in urban estate branch of our bank. I can work from this branch for two weeks as well as I can be familiar with the process of payments. As I have already confirmed from the manager of the urban estate branch that one spare seat is available and I can easily accommodate there.
Looking forward for your prompt and adequate action on this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Patrick Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Moore, I am writing to request you about the ad...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'fundamentals'.
Suggestion: fundamentals
...ing of circulation the payments and the basic fundamentals of the flow of funds in overseas. Thi...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion on this matter. Yours sincerely, Patrick Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152173913 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62690654501 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.79707104 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197596528127 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718238960005 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536744604051 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997213511328 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372523938826 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.