People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
An ideal society is not new phrase to anybody. However, there will not have any exact definition of an ideal society. It all depends on individual’s point of view. From my side, an ideal society should contain 03 things: Equality, freedom and happiness. And in order to create an ideal society, it is undeniable that not only government, but each citizen should show their responsibility to their society also.
Firstly, equality is considered as the prerequisite for an ideal society. In that society, people are fairly treated no matter who they are and where they come from. All the human rights are fully protected and respected. An equal society will create a strong connection and improve growth and prosperity in the community. Secondly, freedom is play an important role in creating an ideal society. There will not have an ideal society without freedom - freedom of sovereignty, language, speech, thought, actions...And last but not least, happiness is one of the main factors which decide the ideality of that society. People say that the woman is the reflection of her men, the society is the same. If you want to know this society is ideal or not, look at people, families and their community whether happliness surrounds them. Loving, helping, caring and sharing are the way of happiness. The more we share the more we have.
It is a fact that many policy makers, management consultants & almost government had made their great effort to make an ideal society come true, but they failed most of the times. Personally, each government should create a firm connection to the people in any matters to renovate the society because the final affected object is people living in that society and it is people who decide the existence, steady improvement and prosperity of a society. Besides, people in that society should respect the constitution and law, take their responsibilities as a standard citizen. People can do whatever they want, do it legally.
In conclusion, we all dream of an ideal society, but dream is always a dream, people are not successful to make this dream come true. Instead of thinking about how to create an ideal society, think about how to make a better life for everyone.
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- People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society? 73
- People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society? 84
- People often think about creating an ideal society but most of the times fail in making this happen What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society 96
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...w their responsibility to their society also. Firstly, equality is considered as ...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...y, language, speech, thought, actions...And last but not least, happiness is one of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98382749326 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75150367047 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514824797844 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.1414001814 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0476190476 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.550325354498 0.244688304435 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160624278277 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118486939505 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354910314258 0.151304729494 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588787682297 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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