There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...........,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the bus service in my area.
During the last few weeks, I have experienced many issues related to the timings of the bus during the day. A recurrent bus delay happened in the morning and sometimes in the evening. Another problem was related to the air conditioners which was not working properly at the travel time between my house and the work area.
As a result of the previously mentioned issues, I have got warning from my manager and the human resources department due to repeated delay every morning. Also, I had a flu due to the damaged air conditioners and the poor ventilation at the bus.
I would appreciate it if you could adjust the bus timings in the morning by avoiding the rush hour between 8:30 am and 9:00 am. It would be better if the bus starts his journey before 8:30 am. Thanks in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Nourhan Magdi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...t warning from my manager and the human resources department due to repeated delay every ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73456790123 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51228501155 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6076915966 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186766562364 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638956752876 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356727635617 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988487136188 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431571541243 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.