Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
TO BEGIN WITH, AS THE PROMPT SAYS THAT OVER THE YEARS THE DEVOTION OF LATE NIGHT NEWS HAS INCREASED INCLINATION ON TIMING OF NATIONAL NEWS AND THE WEATHER AND LOCAL NEWS HAVE BEEN MINIMIZED, THERE ARE CHANCES THAT THERE ARE MORE NATIONAL NEWS WHICH ARE MORE SIGNIFICANT OR EXIGENT TO THE VIEWERS COMPARED TO THE LOCAL NEWS OR THE WEATHER FORECAST SO THE TELECAST OF NATIONAL NEWS HAS INCREASED. IF THERE ANY CHANCES OF THIS THEN THE ARGUMENT IS TENUOSLY WEAK.
THE COMPLAINTS RECEIVED TO THE NEWS FORECASTERS BY THE VIEWERS WAS REGARDING THE DECREASED COVERAGE OF LOCAL NEWS AND WEATHER, SO THERE ARE CHANCES THAT THE BROACASTERS HAVE SUFFICIENT DATA OF THE DEMAND OF TyPE OF NEWS THE VIEWERS ENJOY SO THEY ARE BROADCASTING NATIONAL NEWS AND THERE ARE ONLY A FEW VIEWERS COMPLAINING AND WHICH ARE OUTWEIGHED BY THE NATIONAL NEWS VIEWERS. WHICH MAKES THE ARGUMENT SIGNIFICANTLY WEAK.
THERE ARE CHANCES THAT THE NATIONAL NEWS BROADCASTING IS HELPING THE BROADCASTERS TO EARN MORE MONEY COMPARATIVELY TO THE LOCAL NEWS AND WEATHER FORECAST AND ALSO THERE ARE CHANCES THAT THE LOCAL NEWS AND WEATHER FORECAST BROADCAST IS NOT ATTRACTING VIEWERS COMPARED TO THE NUMBER OF VIEWERS ATTRACTED BY NATIONAL NEWS.
THERE ARE CHANCES THAT IF THE BROADCASTERS WHO ARE THINKING TO RESTART BROADCASTING LOCAL NEWS AND WEATHER FORECAST AS A SCHEDULED LATE NIGHT PROGRAM MIGHT LOOSE THE VIEWERS OF NATIONAL NEWS VIEWERS WHICH IS NOT MENTIONED IN THE PROMPT THAT WHAT IS THE WEIGHTAGE OF VIEWERS AND WHAT IS MORE PREFERED BY THE VIEWERS, JUST TO REVAMP THE REVENUES COULD NOT ASSURE THE ATTRACTION OF VIEWERS.
TO INFER, THE ARGUMENT AS IT STANDS NOW IS CONSIDERABLY FLAWED DUE TO ITS RELIANCE ON SEVERAL UNWARRANTED ASSUMPTIONS. IF THE AUTHOR IS ABLE TO ANSWER THE ABOVE QUESTIONS AND OFFER MORE EVIDENCE, THEN ONLY IT IS ABLE TO BE EVALUATED AND PROPOSE IF IT IS VIABLE TO RESCHEDULE THE LOCAL NEWS AND WEATHER FORECAST AS THE LATE NIGHT PROGRAM INSTEAD OF NATIONAL NEWS.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 331 350
No. of Characters: 1608 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.265 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.858 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.657 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 41.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.869 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.484 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.733 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “IF” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ELECAST OF NATIONAL NEWS HAS INCREASED. IF THERE ANY CHANCES OF THIS THEN THE ARGU...
^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...PLAINTS RECEIVED TO THE NEWS FORECASTERS BY THE VIEWERS WAS REGARDING THE DECREAS...
^^
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “WHICH” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...UTWEIGHED BY THE NATIONAL NEWS VIEWERS. WHICH MAKES THE ARGUMENT SIGNIFICANTLY WEAK. ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...AKES THE ARGUMENT SIGNIFICANTLY WEAK. THERE ARE CHANCES THAT THE NATIONAL NEWS...
^^^^
Line 13, column 157, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: Lose
...AS A SCHEDULED LATE NIGHT PROGRAM MIGHT LOOSE THE VIEWERS OF NATIONAL NEWS VIEWERS WH...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, then, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 331.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98187311178 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68919173258 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 204.123752495 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392749244713 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 705.55239521 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.8473053892 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.985385922 57.8364921388 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.125 119.503703932 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.375 23.324526521 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.70786347227 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402204716871 0.218282227539 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176785211597 0.0743258471296 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147592703731 0.0701772020484 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261957500269 0.128457276422 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889285486922 0.0628817314937 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.3799401198 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.197005988 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32208582834 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.1389221557 165% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.9071856287 151% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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