Given chart depicts the precentage of residents in Canada who went to four different destinations. The parellel axis of the graph shows the percentages while the perpendicular stands for the variety of places.
Overall, cinema was the most popular sector visited by the all three sectors, in contrast theatre was visited by the least.
Firstly, 55 percentage of the new immigrants went to library and they where the top uses of library,on the other hands the other three sectors they were in third position with 50 percentage in cinema, 35 percentage zoo and 10 percentage theatre respectively.
Secondly, new immigrants from English speaking countries went to the Zoo the most and the other three sector's they stood in second position. Last but the least,70 percentage of natives, watched movies while they were in second position in the other sectors except in library where they fall behind the others.
- The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Trees are essential for the existence of the human race as they provide the oxygen that we need to survice Yet daily all around the globe large areas of woodland are being detroyed Many people feel that they as individuals can do nothing and that only 89
- Some people thInk that studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the impacts on children if they are not taught history?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples f 78
- the development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. what are advantages and disadvantages? 67
- Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your own option. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e most popular sector visited by the all three sectors, in contrast theatre was v...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: THEY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'were', the simple past of "to be"?
Suggestion: were
...new immigrants went to library and they where the top uses of library,on the other ha...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , on
...y and they where the top uses of library,on the other hands the other three sectors...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d position with 50 percentage in cinema, 35 percentage zoo and 10 percentage thea...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'zoo' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'zoos'.
Suggestion: zoos
...50 percentage in cinema, 35 percentage zoo and 10 percentage theatre respectively....
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. Last but the least,70 percentage of natives, watched movies while they were...
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Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...0 percentage of natives, watched movies while they were in second position in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, third, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14189189189 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6730382169 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7910050308 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.23603664747 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0691605005103 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403424300508 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278655671896 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495095324424 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271227985302 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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