Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction that since last month, I am suffering the problem of hot water in Bathroom. Usually, I get Hot water 3 to 4 days per week and rest of days, Heater system is not working. As you know, I am living at your flat since last Year but I could not found any problem in earlier.
Nowadays, the weather is changed and feel cool at morning and night so it is necessary to have Hot water during shower but Hot water system is running unstable and inconsistence. I complained to workmen to solve the issue and he came and repaired it but again, today morning, same found problem as earlier and felt cool when take a shower with cold water. It can cause fever and malaria diseases.
I would be grateful if you could solve the permanently problem or setup up a new heater system instead of old one. I strongly believe that this is the right solution to fix it. If you will not solve the problem, seek to legal action on it.
I look forward to hearing positively from you in next week.
Yours sincerely,
Samit Bhavsar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'watered'.
Suggestion: watered
...nd night so it is necessary to have Hot water during shower but Hot water system is r...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
... and he came and repaired it but again, today morning, same found problem as earlier and felt...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t week. Yours sincerely, Samit Bhavsar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40404040404 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45155073578 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6299910863 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2727272727 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206240785675 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657451791097 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451496339026 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10927214042 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310405932785 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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