Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only.
Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
In this modern era, most boys and girls are suffering from those diseases which they were formerly faced by grown-ups only. The main disease is obesity which is prevalent among children. The primary cause of this disease is the lack of physical work and a public awareness campaign can solve this cause.
The most prominent cause of obesity is not doing any physical activity among teenagers. The significant part of their day is spent either spent in the classrooms or on a sofa in front of the TV or the internet once they reach home. Unlike the earlier times, when they used to go out to play with their friends. For instance, a recent survey conducted by Cambridge University and concluded that around 70% case of obesity among adolescents resulted that they do not pay any physical games like basketball, football instead they love to play indoor games like video games, watching movies with junk food like burger, pizza very often. In this result, earlier these diseases were considered only for adults, but now children are not doing physical exercise which means they do not burn their energy just store them in fat.
A long-term solution to this predicament is to educate children about the dangers of consuming fast food irresponsibly. Children in schools could be taught about how to curb the overweight so that the next generation will act more seriously. They are also likely to tell people about the risks of leading a sedentary lifestyle. For example, school children in China were taught about the consequences of eating junk food and not doing any physical work which will lead them to gain unuseful weight in their body and now every child compulsory to take part in at least two sports. China has become the first country that gains more medals in all types of sports events.
In conclusion, children have caused by obesity because they do not invest their time in outdoor activity and they must be taught about the risk of living a sedentary lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ess campaign can solve this cause. The most prominent cause of obesity is not ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... any physical activity among teenagers. The significant part of their day is spent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88165680473 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40933056655 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.017781998 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226076808951 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085129499437 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789844533743 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14754180062 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720098523317 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.