people today can use internet to learn the life and culture of another country, so it cannot be necessary to travel to oter country. agree or disagree?
In this tech-savvy era, there is a colossal upsurge in the trend to see the individuals discussing that it is important to travel abroad to learn their culture and lifestyle. Whilst, others claim that it is not necessary while the internet has a myriad of information to learn about other nation. Thereby, I agree with the latter viewpoint, and in this essay, I shall explain both sides of the argument by analysing it.
On the one hand, compelling pieces of evidence prove that it is not important to venture out to another nation. Firstly, within a single click of the button, a complete history of any country can be learned, hence it saves time. For example, Wikipedia is a master page, by entering country name it displays an entire detail about that country from the origin. Secondly, travelling abroad to learn their tradition would cost a fortune each time, and this cannot be afforded by everyone. As a result, one can learn about more than one country through the internet without spending an abundance of money.
On the flip side, people across the board discriminate that, it is essential to travel to another country for knowing their lifestyle better. First, the look and feel the experience is a significant part of understanding other nations culture which would be hindered while learning it through online details. For instance, conversing directly with the native people gives a great knowledge about their customs and daily lives. Moreover, online information is sometimes not highly reliable, where there is a possibility of missing or incorrect data about other nations. However, there are concerns about affordability and assurance for entire knowledge about countries.
In conclusion, due to technology development, it is not required to travel abroad to know about their cultures and way of living. Ergo, it's downsides can be overlooked or curbed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14983713355 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73322318352 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9038030064 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179050518027 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585094418736 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038752394304 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110530699331 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162205712654 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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