some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with a cold climate. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
A considerable number of people assert that living in humid weather is great. Others, on the other hand, are adamant opponents of the aforementioned view claiming that living in a country with freezing temperature is lovely. As far as I am concerned, the merits and drawbacks of both views must be pondered upon prior to advocating one.
On the one hand, there may be certain advantages associated with living in a high-temperature place. For one thing, during summer washing our clothes is particularly easy, and this can be dried out in a few minutes after the wash. Furthermore, people can go to any place regardless of rainfall. However, there are certain disadvantages galore inherent to lifestyle in humid nature. To begin with, due to excessive temperature, our body gets dehydrated, and this causes dizziness and burnout. Moreover, our human body can withstand only a certain amount of heat, if it exceeds the survival turn to be exacerbated.
On the other hand, just as living in a hot place, residing in a cold place has its own drawback. There is a possibility of getting cold and this healing time will be longer. Yet, this seemingly serious problem can be best overshadowed by numerous benefits lifestyle in a freezing climate can bring to their residence. For example, by living in such a place, a person feels so comfortable, and they feel fresh and energetic. That way they can make to stand away from the humid temperatures
All in all, I am of the adamant view that the latter holds merit. I take this view on account in a fit if the fact that despite some disadvantages raised, the merits galore inherent to cold climate far outweigh the aforementioned flaws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'benefits'' or 'benefit's'?
Suggestion: benefits'; benefit's
...em can be best overshadowed by numerous benefits lifestyle in a freezing climate can bri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for one thing, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88850174216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9268831918 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6530200076 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168341656179 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057333351792 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472783581176 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107883364196 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512103819864 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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