The line graph demonstrates the water consumption worldwide in a 100 year period, while the table illustrates the water usage of two countries in the year 2000. It can be clearly seen that the agricultural sector has consistently inclined in water utilization. However, Brazil topped Congo in water usage due to its population and widened irrigated area, as well as in water consumption per person.
Let us take a look at agricultural level. It started to inclined from 500 km3 in 1900 and dramatically climbed to 3,000 km3 in the year 2000. Referring to the industrial and domestic use, it maintai...
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