The pie charts describes the expenses of a particular institution in the year 1981, 1991 and 2001. It can be clearly seen that teachers salary got the highest proportion averaging from 40-50% in a three year period of time.
Let us take a closer look at other workers salary. In 1991 particularly, it range below a quarter, which is 22%, and in 1981, it is almost more than a quarter, which is 28%. By the year 2001, it gradually dropped to 15%. Then this was followed by resources ranging from 9% in 2001, slightly rose up to 15% in 1981 and dramatically inclined to 20% for the year 1991.
However, furniture and equipment varies a lot for the fact that it covers from 5% in 1991, 15% in 1981 and 23% in 2001. Lastly, insurances remained the lowest with 2% for 1981, 3% for 1991 and 8% for the year 2001.
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