You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.
Dear Mr. Rakesh,
I am writing this letter with regards to a reference letter I need for my job. I have passout from your college last year in 2018 and was looking for a job activaly from then. Finally, I have got an opportunity to work with multinational where first six month, I will work as data sciencetist trainee, my job will be analyzing the company data and prepare various visualization. but before joining freshers have to submit a reference letter from their respective colleges.
I request you to mention following details in the letter along with your signature and university stamp. Firstly, please mention about how i had been in my academics through out four years. Secondly, you can tell about my presence in college, I expect here to get excellent remark since i never missed my classes. last but not the least, you can write about my behaviour with my teachers and fellow classmates and extra curriculum activities i participated in college such as science fair, debate competition.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Devendra Dadhich
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Rakesh, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...work with multinational where first six month, I will work as data sciencetist traine...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...data and prepare various visualization. but before joining freshers have to submit ...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t before joining freshers have to submit a reference letter from their respective...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tamp. Firstly, please mention about how i had been in my academics through out fo...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...on about how i had been in my academics through out four years. Secondly, you can tell abou...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...remark since i never missed my classes. last but not the least, you can write about ...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'classmates'.
Suggestion: classmates
...about my behaviour with my teachers and fellow classmates and extra curriculum activities i parti...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ssmates and extra curriculum activities i participated in college such as science...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Your sincerely, Devendra Dadhich
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00552486188 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76861186962 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1981202675 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229034190812 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926665926967 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689417369255 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129568086797 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437089989003 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.