The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The chart provides information on average temperatures and the total number of hours of sunshine annually in three different cities.They are London, Newyork and Sydney.
On the whole,Newyork has experienced extreme cold and hot weather conditions than Sydney and London.On the other hand,London has less total number of hours of sunshine per year.
The average monthly temperatures of both Newyork and London were almost similar.The winters in Newyork were colder by 4 degrees and around 5 degrees in london.The summer in london and newyork was 24 degrees and 30 degrees respectively.The distribution pattern of temperature was quite same in these two cities.In contrast,sydney was warmest than other two cities.Where,most of the highest temperature ranges between 22-25 degress in summer and in winters it will be just over 15 degrees.
It is evident that,sydney and newyork have highest annual hours of sunshine as 2,473 and 2,535 hours respectively.London gets leastnumber of hours of subshine of about 1,180 hours Although newyork gets more number of hours of sunshine it has typical climatic conditions throughout the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in contrast, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57471264368 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27596289419 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.550573705 43.030603864 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.5 112.824112599 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.5 22.9334400587 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 5.23603664747 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194607754541 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143619676022 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659029896595 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143619676022 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659029896595 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.2329268293 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.